<VV> Four Clubs at Niagara articles

Ruth Dorogi dfamily@cecomet.net
Tue, 7 Dec 2004 14:07:32 -0500


I finally had the time to look over the original article (Four Clubs 2004) and
compare it to the article (Four Clubs at Niagara) in the Corsa Communique.

An editor's job can involve tough decisions, but I do think that much of the
vitality of the original article was lost in the editing.   The "essential
facts" maybe there but some important facts were lost in the listing of the
concours results.

I think the Chapter News  items can be more than "primarily news reports."
They can also be interpreted as publicity for a future convention.  I enjoy
Gary's writing style, and I think creativity in any form should be
encouraged.

My wife and I had a most enjoyable weekend - thanks to many hardworking club
members, a spectacular location, and a warm, and friendly host country.
Dennis Dorogi